Bad Apple

I really never had a bad apple in my group but if i did have a bad apple I would tell him or her to get their act right are get out of the group.

group project

Well the group projects that I have done were a great experience because everybody did something nobody was being lazy or not do nothing. I fell like the group I’m in is going to another great experience because of the people I have in my group everybody welling to work.

Different Grasses

The thing I don’t really noticed back in my home town is how the grass looks around my town. For example the grass that I see around my apartment is total different from the grass back around my home town. The difference between the grass in my hometown and the grass in front of my apartment is that the grass in front of the apartment is greener and healthier than the grass back at home. I did not notice that until I sat down and thought about it and that when I came up with this conclusion

Manifesto" Making of a Marginal Farm What is his intent with each piece?

To me in Manifesto and Making of a Marginal Farm the intent was to show the audiences how important land is to them. They did this by using a lot of details about the land in both readings.

The thing that i have done to change the world is be a good role models for kids. I do that by showing how you should act and by wroking hard in the classroom and on the football feild.By caring myself in the right way make kids want to do the right thimg like go to class instead of skiping class because they see me not missing class so they don't miss. when go talk at my old school and tell them how they should act and how they should work hard in everything they do and not try to find a short cut in anything they do. this is what i have done to chage the world already.

If someone asked me what do i stand for I would tell them my values. that would be i work hard in everything i do, try to be happy no matter what type of problems i have, and always trying to impact someone life by caring myself in the right way. All this tie together in my opinion to makes a good person.

outline

intro: what you will talk about inthe paper?
what piece you've chose?

whose the audience?
the purpose of the writer.
types of strategies of rhetorical analysis

body- substane"evidnce", how the evidence
support the purpose
- organization

"A Thousand-Mile Walk to the Gulf"

The things that stand out in my mind were how he was describing the alligators and how other people looked at them. These details stand out in my mind because it made what he was talking about make since to me.

my town

This is my town.
This is where my ancestors went to school.
This is my old broken down town.
These are my fans, my stadium
my 300 pound wild hog, my cotton mouth snake.
I work my body on that field,
cool down under the stands.
My inspiration comes from the fans.
At my stadium I make the plays,
satisfy the fans, be a leader,
score the game winning touchdown.
The field is my whole town,
family legacy, my legacy helps keep it going.
I dream big in this stadium. I pulled my football
from the sidelines, and I fall to my knees
next to it to ask can I make it.
I sleep while a breeze dies at stadium walls,
waking to dawn with my dust.
This is my house.

Hurricane Katrina

Hurricane Katrina was a very devastating event for the people of New Orleans. The residents were warned of the hurricane coming but blew it off like any other warning. This time was different because it was a major event that would change New Orleans for the rest of their lifes. The residents of hurricane feel as if the government did not help them the way that they should have. There were residents getting kicked out of the hotel rooms, basicaly going to nothing because they could not afford to pay for the room. There were hundreds of people still being rescued after the evacuation. Residents on the street with no food and water. The residents of New Orleans felt like they had no one to rely on because the government was not doing absolutly everything that they could to help them. They felt like the government didnt serve them right.

Enviroment

The enviroment is relaxing, refreshing, and beautiful. I love to watch the sunset at night and stars twinkle through the night. The air is refreshing as I walk out of my door and step out onto the floor. The birds chirping is so pleasing to the ear, o how the enviroment is relaxing, refreshing, and beautiful.

ocean

I found a place for me to be. I love to look at the ocean. The ways the waves sway in many different motions. The smell of the water is so fresh and new. The color changes from green to blue. I really have no clue why the ocean waves are so beautiful and blue.

Bright Stars

I sit at night and look at the beautiful light. The stars amaze me more and more each and every night. The way they shine all so bright. Twinkling through out the night. I love the way there all so bright. They make me want to go watch them every night and watch them shine all so bright.

summer day

The specific details that stayed in my mind were how Mary Oliver started out asking questions and how she answered them. That's why the details stayed in my mind; these details really made me think about what she's talking about in her poem. The details help me see the whole picture of what she was talking about.

The specific details that stayed in my mind. Was that he stayed so close to the University of Utah and the other thing that stayed in my mind was Bear River Migratory Brid Refuge. the reason why was the university of Utah stayed in my mind was because utah is on of my favrite schools when I was little. The reason Bear river stayed in my mind because he kept talkimg about it so it stayed with me.