Friday, June 25, 2010

Bad Apple

I really never had a bad apple in my group but if i did have a bad apple I would tell him or her to get their act right are get out of the group.

group project

Well the group projects that I have done were a great experience because everybody did something nobody was being lazy or not do nothing. I fell like the group I’m in is going to another great experience because of the people I have in my group everybody welling to work.

Different Grasses

The thing I don’t really noticed back in my home town is how the grass looks around my town. For example the grass that I see around my apartment is total different from the grass back around my home town. The difference between the grass in my hometown and the grass in front of my apartment is that the grass in front of the apartment is greener and healthier than the grass back at home. I did not notice that until I sat down and thought about it and that when I came up with this conclusion

Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Manifesto" Making of a Marginal Farm What is his intent with each piece?

To me in Manifesto and Making of a Marginal Farm the intent was to show the audiences how important land is to them. They did this by using a lot of details about the land in both readings.

Friday, June 18, 2010

The thing that i have done to change the world is be a good role models for kids. I do that by showing how you should act and by wroking hard in the classroom and on the football feild.By caring myself in the right way make kids want to do the right thimg like go to class instead of skiping class because they see me not missing class so they don't miss. when go talk at my old school and tell them how they should act and how they should work hard in everything they do and not try to find a short cut in anything they do. this is what i have done to chage the world already.

Wednesday, June 16, 2010

If someone asked me what do i stand for I would tell them my values. that would be i work hard in everything i do, try to be happy no matter what type of problems i have, and always trying to impact someone life by caring myself in the right way. All this tie together in my opinion to makes a good person.

Wednesday, June 9, 2010

outline

intro: what you will talk about inthe paper?
what piece you've chose?

whose the audience?
the purpose of the writer.
types of strategies of rhetorical analysis

body- substane"evidnce", how the evidence
support the purpose
- organization

Tuesday, June 8, 2010

"A Thousand-Mile Walk to the Gulf"

The things that stand out in my mind were how he was describing the alligators and how other people looked at them. These details stand out in my mind because it made what he was talking about make since to me.